Johnson: Project 4 Revision

It's still a mess-- I need to redo some of the letters so that they separate more effectively. I'm also loosing objectivity, so if anyone has an opinion regarding this, your comments would be greatly appreciated.

Stradinger: 4: draft 2

Here is my 2nd draft. I'm having troubles with positioning the letters. Please help!!

Ifonlaja: Project 4: Final

well...this is my final copy i decided to move the letters just a bit because i really like the way they are in a sense borders for all the crazy stuff going on around in them and around them.....i think its pretty balanced this way so that one can look all over the place and be kept interested but it still goes together in a clean fashion.....hope you all like it, cause this was my favorite draft and i did my best!

 

Pihlaja: artist

 ...just playing around with some things..tell me what you guys think please!!

Johnson: rough draft

It's not quite working yet. Any suggestions are welcome.

Stradinger: 4: Rough

My artist that I picked was Matthew Ritchie. I decided to take two styles of his work and put them together. Let me know what you think...

Ifonlaja: Murray: digital rough draft

THIS IS WHAT I HAVE SO FAR.....it kinda took me awhile but i think it works......looking for suggestion asap!?!?

PIhlaja: Artist

Here's my rough draft. Open to ANY suggestions :)

Group 2: Ifonlaja: NEW SKETCH